Đề bài
The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. (Cambridge 17, Test 1)
Mở bài
1 câu – paraphrase lại đề thi bằng cách dùng từ/cụm từ đồng nghĩa.
The maps show an industrial zone in a town called Norbiton as it is now and after refurbishment.
Tổng quan
Nhìn vào bức tranh tổng thể để chỉ ra được những điểm nổi bật nhất của biểu đồ. Đối với biểu đồ này ta thấy các điểm nổi bật:
- factories -> thay bằng houses
- có thêm nhiều cơ sở cho các mục đích như giải trí, giáo dục, y tế, thương mại.
→ Overall, according to the prososed plans this area will become increasingly populated, with the construction of a large number of houses and the introduction of facilities for entertainment, educational, commercial, and medical purposes.
Thân bài
At present, there is a roundabout in the center surrounded by factories, a road leading to the east with factories on either side, and a main road in the south of the map. In the north, a river runs from west to east with farmland situated to its north.
Regarding the future, around the roundabout new houses and some shops will be built to replace the factories, while a medical center will be constructed to the southeast. There will be two new roads splitting off from the roundabout with houses along them, while a new, smaller roundabout will be erected in the south. The eastern road will have housing on either side, a playground to the north, and a school at the end of it. In the north, the agricultural land will be reduced in size to make way for houses and a bridge will be constructed, allowing access to this new residential area.
Bài mẫu
The maps show an industrial zone in a town called Norbiton as it is now and after refurbishment.
Overall, according to the prososed plans, this area will become increasingly populated, with the construction of a large number of houses and the introduction of facilities for entertainment, educational, commercial, and medical purposes.
At present, there is a roundabout in the center surrounded by factories, a road leading to the east with factories on either side, and a main road in the south of the map. In the north, a river runs from west to east with farmland situated to its north.
Regarding the future, around the roundabout new houses and some shops will be built to replace the factories, while a medical center will be constructed to the southeast. There will be two new roads splitting off from the roundabout with houses along them, while a new, smaller roundabout will be erected in the south. The eastern road will have housing on either side, a playground to the north, and a school at the end of it. In the north, the agricultural land will be reduced in size to make way for houses and a bridge will be constructed, allowing access to this new residential area.
(205 words, written by Huyen Nguyen, improved by David S. Wills)
ở body 1 về now map, cô có thể xem lại houses vì ở đó k thấy houses (houses on either side )