Đề thi IELTS Writing ngày 4/1/2020
Today, TV channels provide men’s sport shows more than women’s sport shows. Why? Should TV channels give equal time for women’s sport and men’s sport?
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MỞ BÀI
2 câu – paraphrase lại đề thi bằng cách dùng từ/cụm từ đồng nghĩa.
Vậy là chúng ta sẽ có một mở bài hoàn chỉnh:
These days, when it comes to sport, a higher number of games played by men are broadcast, compared to that of women. A growing number of people having more interest in men’s sporting events is the main reason for this and I believe that equal attention should be paid to women’s sport.
THÂN BÀI
OUTLINE THÂN BÀI
CHUẨN BỊ TỪ VỰNG
THÂN BÀI HOÀN CHỈNH
The major factor leading television producers to prioritise men’s sport is the audience watching male athletes competing considerably outnumbers people watching shows of their female counterparts. More viewers mean more profits, advertising contracts and sponsorship investments for the TV channels broadcasting the shows. Take football in Vietnam as an example. Men’s football match at the 30th SEA games attracted millions of people both from different parts of Vietnam and other neighbouring countries, while the figure for women’s match was significantly lower. Giving men’s sport a higher priority is, therefore, a wise strategy to earn large profits and attract more investment.
However, I would argue that TV coverage should not be biased towards men’s sport and that female athletes should be given equal opportunities. If men’s sports programmes continue to receive significantly more coverage than the programmes of their opposite sex, it might increase gender inequality, which is one of the most serious issues in many parts of the world today. Another thing is that there has been a dramatic increase in the number of people who have interest in women’s sport in recent years, and hence, television coverage should focus more on this area.
KẾT BÀI
Huyền thường làm kết bài bằng cách paraphrase mở bài:
Vậy là chúng ta sẽ có một kết bài như sau:
In conclusion, a wider audience watching men’s sports channels is the most important reason why TV producers provide more men’s shows than women’s shows, and I am of the opinion that there should be a greater equality in the coverage of men’s and women’s sport.
SAMPLE ANSWER
These days, when it comes to sport, a higher number of games played by men are broadcast, compared to that of women. A growing number of people having more interest in men’s sporting events is the main reason for this and I believe that equal attention should be paid to women’s sport.
The major factor leading television producers to prioritise men’s sport is the audience watching male athletes competing considerably outnumbers people watching shows of their female counterparts. More viewers mean more profits, advertising contracts and sponsorship investments for the TV channels broadcasting the shows. Take football in Vietnam as an example. Men’s football match at the 30th SEA games attracted millions of people both from different parts of Vietnam and other neighbouring countries, while the figure for women’s match was significantly lower. Giving men’s sport a higher priority is, therefore, a wise strategy to earn large profits and attract more investment.
However, I would argue that TV coverage should not be biased towards men’s sport and that female athletes should be given equal opportunities. If men’s sports programmes continue to receive significantly more coverage than the programmes of their opposite sex, it might increase gender inequality, which is one of the most serious issues in many parts of the world today. Another thing is that there has been a dramatic increase in the number of people who have interest in women’s sport in recent years, and hence, television coverage should focus more on this area.
In conclusion, a wider audience watching men’s sports channels is the most important reason why TV producers provide more men’s shows than women’s shows, and I am of the opinion that there should be a greater equality in the coverage of men’s and women’s sport.
Giving men’s sport a higher priority is, therefore, a wise strategy to earn large profits and attract more investment.
Chị ơi em không hiểu câu này lắm ạ, chị có thể giải thích thêm cho em được không ạ
Chào em, mình có công thức give something a priority: nghĩa là ưu tiên việc gì.
Khi động từ làm chủ từ, mình V-ing động từ đó, give thành giving em nhé.
Therefore mình có thể đặt ở đầu câu, hoặc giữa câu như câu trên em nhé.
Chị ơi cho e hỏi chút ạ
Cái thông tin ở câu đầu tiên của đoạn 2 thì phải là shows viewers của nam nhiều hơn shows viewers của nữ chứ ạ. Chứ không phải là shows thể thao của nam outnumber shows thể thao của nữ.
Thank you a lot
Chị cảm ơn em nhiều nhé <3. Chị đánh máy từ word ra mà còn nhầm nữa^^
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Cho em hỏi Bài này là dạng Cause/Solution hay Cause/Effect essay
Chào em, đây là dạng 2-part question em nhé.
Yêu cầu 1: Nêu lý do
Yêu cầu 2: Nêu ý kiến của mình em nhé.
Hình như body paragraph 2 có cần thêm phần ví dụ không
Chào chị, dạ tùy cách mình triển khai mà mình có thể đưa thêm ví dụ. Mình có thể triển khai theo kiểu Ý chính –> Ý triển khai chi tiết, hoặc Ý chính –> Ý triển khai –> Vi dụ, cái này tùy cách mình triển khai ý chính thôi ạ.